Jhukti hun main hi kyun bhalaa, ye tum bhi dekhogey kabhi
Ye sharm hoti kya bala, ye tum bhi dekhogey kabhi
Jo din dahaadey teer nazron ke padengey jism par
Unke zakhmon ki naasoorta ko tum bhi dekhogey kabhi
Jhonkey hain choolhey mein jo laakar yun mere aazaad sapney
Us hi agan mein khud ko jalta tum bhi dekhogey kabhi
Ik raat dilli ki bason mein baithkar dekho zaraa
Khud hi khud ko khud se darta tum bhi dekhogey kabhi
Tum dekhna sadkon pe jab phir Durga chalkar aaegi
Aur uske aane se jo hoga, vo tum bhi dekhogey kabhi
Jis yash pe itraatey ho tum, us yash ka jo anjaam hoga
Vo hum bhi dekhengey kabhi aur tum bhi dekhogey kabhi
Found the third couplet very beautiful! Love the way the ghazal flows and how strong it is!
ReplyDeleteIn the fourth couplet, is the word supposed to be 'bahon' instead of 'bason'?