The desire to live is communicated strongly in the poem. Do you feel that it might work better if there were a stanza break before 'terrified'?
Sad girls? Sad girls aren't pretty. Not with their smudged kajal. Sad girls just need a guy. What an attention-seeking whore. S...
The desire to live is communicated strongly in the poem. Do you feel that it might work better if there were a stanza break before 'terrified'?
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