The road is indebted to the drain
how can one take pleasure in you dear rain?
you're our 9 AM exasperation
we're afraid of being late
"'it was raining heavy" being
the faultless pretext to be made
seldom flood, steady drought
you're a perilous proffer we've brought.
how can one take pleasure in you dear rain?
you're our 9 AM exasperation
we're afraid of being late
"'it was raining heavy" being
the faultless pretext to be made
seldom flood, steady drought
you're a perilous proffer we've brought.
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ReplyDeleteRain in SNU
(2017)
The road's become a drain,
no pleasure in you, dear rain.
You're our 9 AM exasperation.
We're afraid of being late, but of
all excuses, you're not first-rate,
"There was heavy rain!" sounds feeble
when made, can't even say we had to wade
a Noah flood or survive a drought,
you're the only silly offer we've brought.