Although one word repeated thrice
Will no longer bring a movement
to its knees,
I shall indulge in sour grapes
For as long as it takes Democracy
To understand the Hypocrisy
That it was five men who decided
the fate
Of a hundred million women.
Love this! Also love the indulging in sour grape line lol
ReplyDeleteWho are these 5 men ?
ReplyDeletehttp://m.timesofindia.com/india/triple-talaq-case-meet-the-judges-of-the-sc-constitution-bench/articleshow/60171775.cms
DeleteThe things I liked:
ReplyDeletePrecision, End Rhyme (Hypocrisy-Democracy),The way it opens up a larger conversation and imagery!
Things you can work upon:
See if you can make the internal rhyme men-women stand out a bit more!